Wow, what an excellent DLO Iron and team! You have created a very successful retelling of the fable. I love how you have used all of the key features of a movie we have been looking at, like camera angles and projecting your voice towards the camera. Next time you need to focus on making the moral of the story more explicit in your retelling, just like we have been practising in our writing.
Wow, what an excellent DLO Iron and team! You have created a very successful retelling of the fable. I love how you have used all of the key features of a movie we have been looking at, like camera angles and projecting your voice towards the camera. Next time you need to focus on making the moral of the story more explicit in your retelling, just like we have been practising in our writing.
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