Monday, October 29, 2012

Narrative-What is going to happen next?

Jimmy is 19 and he wanted to break the world record for jumping off the swing. He was excited for what was going to happen next?!?! “Hmmm I hope something bad is not going to happen once I land on the ground” Jimmy said.

“I’m almost there,I’m almost there ” shouted Jimmy while putting his hands in the air. What will happen next? As he was near the ground, someone cracked a glass and it shattered under where he was going to land.

NEK MINUT his bottom hit the glass and he shouted “OUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”. His friends got so worried and picked him up. “Are you ok?” asked Tom as he patted Jimmy’s head. Jimmy replied and mumbled “Yes, but just a bit because my bottom is sore.”

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

My Narrative-At the beach

On a sunny day, my family went for a picnic at the Pt England reserve. We took so much food so we could eat whenever we wanted to. I was packed and ready to go.

As soon as we got into the car, we went off so quick because we wanted to be the first ones there. Yay we are first. It was incredibly amazing because we love the beach, especially when it is a sunny day as well.

“We made it” I shouted while jumping out of the car. I saw more people coming and it was our neighbours. They hopped out of their car and came straight at us.

“What are you doing here?” asked our neighbour while scratching her hand. “Ahhh we just came here because it was just too hot to stay at home” I replied back with a smile. I was worried because it looked like she was very angry.

While making a sand castle, I was talking to my nana and grandpa. Our neighbour came and kicked my sand, so my nana, grandpa and I got so angry. I really wanted to hit her.

As I walked up to her, I put on my mad face. “Why did you kick my sand castle?” I asked her angrily. “I’m allowed” she replied grinning. I got so mad.

So she got angry and said “I am ignoring you because you are not being nice.” “Care” I shouted back clapping my hands together. But then I felt sorry and went to her.

“Sorry” I said with my sad face. “Its ok, but as long as we won’t argue anymore” she replied to me when kicking the sand. “Ok” I mumbled back. So then we forgot this ever happened and had a big hug.

Thank Miss King and Miss Squires for checking my story!

Friday, October 19, 2012


With my sister Cecilia dressed like a clown and I dressed as a ninja, she took me out for Halloween. Before I knew it she had snatched the bucket of lollies off me. “Give it back you selfish girl” I shouted madly. “No way, you give it to me because I took you trick or treating” she relied aggressively. Then mum came and took it off from both of us and ate it herself.

Monday, October 15, 2012


These words are room 13s favourite toys! We made this on a site called Wordle and you type in any word and it will show up just like mine. You can also mess around with it like making fonts!

White Sunday

On Saturday we got ready for White Sunday. It is when kids celebrate there day. I really liked it because I like standing up in front of people and doing my speech. I was feeling nervous but not after all, I stood up and faced my fears.

As soon as Sunday came, we ate and had our very last practice before we get ready to say our speeches.   We went to change and wear white clothes. My sisters and I had our dress from last year which was so fluffy. "Come in the car now" shouted my mum! I was in a rush.

We drove until we got there and took everything we needed. As we stepped in the church I saw my cousins and I was very embarrassed. I moved some table before we can start church. I wondered how is it going to feel standing up in front of these many people? 

My grandpa wanted it to start so we did and we sat down quietly and quickly! We started of with a song  then another song and after those to things we did a prayer. It was time to stand up after a long prayer! Our cousins were going up first because there one was long.

First they danced and then made there short speech, but the other speech was very long because the were bit with songs. They ended with a dance and sat down. Our one was up next and we stood up and walked to the front.

Our starting thing was a song and after was our speech. My sister started of with saying what we are going to talk about and then was my other sis. It was my turn to say my speech and I said it to my cousin. He said something back and after was my last speech I said to him and he replied back.

Then my oldest sister had a short speech. She just had to say a question and then my cousin answers. It was finished and my older sister said the very last speech for our White Sunday speeches. Then it was our song time with a dance.

We said something that we had to say so we finish it of properly. It was in Samoan. We were done and the people cheered!!!

As soon as we kids finished our speeches we carried on with church and it was done. I was so happy!

Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Holidays (White Sunday Rehearsal's)

During the beginning of our holidays, we had to start rehearsing for white Sunday because its coming up in the second week of the holidays. I am looking forward to our White Sunday! I like doing speeches in front of people and dancing. 

I wondered how many speeches was I going to do? Hmm I am doing 2 speeches and they are short. I have got my speeches off by heart and I know how to do the dance.

I am feeling enthusiastic for next week on White Sunday. Hooray!!!