Monday, October 29, 2012

Narrative-What is going to happen next?

Jimmy is 19 and he wanted to break the world record for jumping off the swing. He was excited for what was going to happen next?!?! “Hmmm I hope something bad is not going to happen once I land on the ground” Jimmy said.

“I’m almost there,I’m almost there ” shouted Jimmy while putting his hands in the air. What will happen next? As he was near the ground, someone cracked a glass and it shattered under where he was going to land.

NEK MINUT his bottom hit the glass and he shouted “OUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”. His friends got so worried and picked him up. “Are you ok?” asked Tom as he patted Jimmy’s head. Jimmy replied and mumbled “Yes, but just a bit because my bottom is sore.”

1 comment:

  1. Hey Iron,

    Landing on a glass would be so sore!!!
    So did he break the world record?

    Keep it up!!


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