Friday, November 1, 2013


WALT: Show not tell

As the sun setted in its place 1 group of people came knocking on our door. I was relaxed on the couch to lazy to get it and I shouted to my sister "GET THE DOOR." So she ran down the stairs and twisted the knob of the front door. She was scared but it was Cecilia's friends.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Iron,
    I really like your story of the Halloween relaxing on the couch that was really cool. I really like your story is because you show not tell that is the story all about show not tell. Keep up the great work Iron.


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